How a Lyric SHOULD be written!

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The following lyric, by a major cutting edge talent, shows how lyrics should be written - with directness and passion:

SHE F**KED WITH MY HEAD

She f**ked with my head,
The girl in the cafe,
She called me a wanker,
Because I like pate,
I was her clown for a day and a half,
She gave me grief and a polka-dot scarf.

She f**ked with my mind,
The bitch from McDonalds,
She dressed like a whore,
Said I was a bore,
I walk alone by the waterfront docks,
I dumped the slag and have holes in my socks.

This lyric is far more direct and intense than anything written by Morrissey.
 
> The following lyric, by a major cutting edge talent, shows how lyrics
> should be written - with directness and passion:

> SHE F**KED WITH MY HEAD

> She f**ked with my head,
> The girl in the cafe,
> She called me a wanker,
> Because I like pate,
> I was her clown for a day and a half,
> She gave me grief and a polka-dot scarf.

> She f**ked with my mind,
> The bitch from McDonalds,
> She dressed like a whore,
> Said I was a bore,
> I walk alone by the waterfront docks,
> I dumped the slag and have holes in my socks.

> This lyric is far more direct and intense than anything written by
> Morrissey.

You're right. That moved me.
 
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