Such bloody awful poetry

Carlisle baz

Cock of the north
I’m going food shopping tomorrow as well. It’s pay day🎢🎡🎠

Might get a load of stir fry stuff for
Chinese
Need to stock up on everything like cleaning stuff , tinned and frozen food. I’m low on everything
 

Light Housework

useless eater
I’m going food shopping tomorrow as well. It’s pay day🎢🎡🎠

Might get a load of stir fry stuff for
Chinese
Need to stock up on everything like cleaning stuff , tinned and frozen food. I’m low on everything
Thanks for our little chat baz. You've cheered me up some.
 
POETRY SPAMMMMM!!!
If there's any you would like to see/read more clearly, just let me know which ones : )
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Potty Steven

Guest
"When you're scolded
And want to stay
You're not a child
Yet you can't make up your mind"

Reminded me a bit of this song:

This shouldn't be in a bloody awful poetry thread on So Low. Keep writing and get published.
 
I have some more…
This one I think is actually terrible though
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This one is about Morrissey… :love: :tiphat:
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When I went outside I had a method that I used for a little while- any cars that would go by I'd count. After an album was done, I'd count the cars by groups of 5 I had made, and write that many lines.
For example, this one has 8, that's how many cars went by in an hour starting at 8pm
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I'll post a few more in case someone enjoys them, while I research this business of 'getting published'
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Carlisle baz

Cock of the north
😄 wow! Thanks! I didn't know anybody would be interested in it! It's so nice I could laugh!
Just had a look at a few and you seem to have a flair for writing..

Not that I’m any authority on the matter cos I’m not....

A wise head you have for a 14 year old..

Have you shown these to a teacher ?

Maybe they could point you in the right direction .
 
Just had a look at a few and you seem to have a flair for writing..

Not that I’m any authority on the matter cos I’m not....

A wise head you have for a 14 year old..

Have you shown these to a teacher ?

Maybe they could point you in the right direction .
Thank you!
Actually I don't know any teachers…
well that's not entirely true, but I'm not in public school so I don't talk to any or anything
 
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