My lil band

Wit-and-Wisdom

Nobody's nothing
Sorry to be the forum's biggest nuisance but i thought i would get a worthy opinion of our new song on here. There is currently no recording but lyrics are more than alf as important so i thought i would let you cast your criticism. Be gentle :p

Woe is me

Please, leave me be
Leave me alone
I’ll rot here easily
I don’t want to face the world
I’m not ready
I cannot face the world
I’m not ready

Why must I leave?
What is there outside for me?
But the flowers and the trees
Why can’t I stay?
What is another life wasted
To be perfectly frank
I simply can’t face it

My only fear here
Is a pang of hunger
Nothing can hurt me here
But Ravishing hunger

The only fear there
Are the surges of evil
It seems everything there
Faces massive upheaval
Please, leave me be

Let me rot in peace
My heart will cease
It will not take a minute
It beats slow
Three beats a minute
It beats rightfully so

Why must I leave
I no longer long for life
My only desire is to die
Why can’t I stay?
What is another life wasted
If it doesn’t exist
How can you waste it?

My only fear here
Is a pang of hunger
Nothing can hurt me here
But Ravishing hunger

The only fear there
Are the surges of evil
It seems everything there
Faces massive upheaval

(chant)
Our forebearers fornicate
To sicken you and me x3

My forebearers fornicate
As a cruel joke on me



Many thanks in advance
 

theneverplayedsymphony

The World's Forgotten Boy
Sorry to be the forum's biggest nuisance but i thought i would get a worthy opinion of our new song on here. There is currently no recording but lyrics are more than alf as important so i thought i would let you cast your criticism. Be gentle :p

Woe is me

Please, leave me be
Leave me alone
I’ll rot here easily
I don’t want to face the world
I’m not ready
I cannot face the world
I’m not ready

Why must I leave?
What is there outside for me?
But the flowers and the trees
Why can’t I stay?
What is another life wasted
To be perfectly frank
I simply can’t face it

My only fear here
Is a pang of hunger
Nothing can hurt me here
But Ravishing hunger

The only fear there
Are the surges of evil
It seems everything there
Faces massive upheaval
Please, leave me be

Let me rot in peace
My heart will cease
It will not take a minute
It beats slow
Three beats a minute
It beats rightfully so

Why must I leave
I no longer long for life
My only desire is to die
Why can’t I stay?
What is another life wasted
If it doesn’t exist
How can you waste it?

My only fear here
Is a pang of hunger
Nothing can hurt me here
But Ravishing hunger

The only fear there
Are the surges of evil
It seems everything there
Faces massive upheaval

(chant)
Our forebearers fornicate
To sicken you and me x3

My forebearers fornicate
As a cruel joke on me



Many thanks in advance

I actually really like it! Well done!
 

SvartaSjael

New Member
Sorry to be the forum's biggest nuisance but i thought i would get a worthy opinion of our new song on here. There is currently no recording but lyrics are more than alf as important so i thought i would let you cast your criticism. Be gentle :p

Woe is me

Please, leave me be
Leave me alone
I’ll rot here easily
I don’t want to face the world
I’m not ready
I cannot face the world
I’m not ready

Why must I leave?
What is there outside for me?
But the flowers and the trees
Why can’t I stay?
What is another life wasted
To be perfectly frank
I simply can’t face it

My only fear here
Is a pang of hunger
Nothing can hurt me here
But Ravishing hunger

The only fear there
Are the surges of evil
It seems everything there
Faces massive upheaval
Please, leave me be

Let me rot in peace
My heart will cease
It will not take a minute
It beats slow
Three beats a minute
It beats rightfully so

Why must I leave
I no longer long for life
My only desire is to die
Why can’t I stay?
What is another life wasted
If it doesn’t exist
How can you waste it?

My only fear here
Is a pang of hunger
Nothing can hurt me here
But Ravishing hunger

The only fear there
Are the surges of evil
It seems everything there
Faces massive upheaval

(chant)
Our forebearers fornicate
To sicken you and me x3

My forebearers fornicate
As a cruel joke on me



Many thanks in advance

I'm liking this a lot.
 
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