I wrote a song today and recorded a video

Patrick!

And I watch Home Alone...
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lyrics:
His landlord yells out from the street,
"Pay your rent or you'll be out here by next week!"
At dawn the train passes by, the whistle sounds
like thousands crying for the death of those to come.

He searches like a cage
Never had time to act his age.
"Would that I could spend a year subliming ecstasy from fear
before the axe falls to the wood."

I would have saved them if I could.

..your thoughts?
 
well, it sounds good. I don't understand the lyrics but I get confused by Shakespeare, too. But the guitar serves its purpose well and you have an interesting tuneful voice.
 
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