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redpathetic (6184)
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a decrepit fan

Tuesday May 20, 2008
02:20 AM
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Inside Her

So Smart, because so complicated.
Full of triviality so smart.
Sophisticated, with crushed chili.
Red painted flames all over to signify what you're made of.
Hotheadedness, as a way of life.

Laugh at those who wear flowers not flames.
Walk on those who relax and unwind politely.
Anything to be seen as bad, rebellious, sexy.
Then, when you're no good at it anymore,
Have some kids with your girlfriend you'll marry.

Now you can say that you got married.
Now you can make a case of need that isn't selfish.
You can claw your way up without guilt, a family man.
Children are expensive to care for.
Wives are great hiding places.

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A bitter taste? (Score:1)
There is so much aggression in this... I really could feel the power of it.

It's good.
Kitty3780 -- Saturday May 24 2008, @11:59AM (#303567)
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"There is something I wanted to tell you..."
    It is amazing (Score:1)
    how you can get to the bottom of the Truth - which is a realm where no one wins and no one looses, but where there are more than a few poor pretenders...

    A well-structured and spontaneous poem in its form, with a directness that preserves complexity. It's a "cougar" attack as Marisela said - and extremely rebellious - but it is also a candid mind baring itself.
    Mrs. Woolf -- Wednesday May 28 2008, @12:32PM (#303723)
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