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Discussion in 'The Pigsty archive (read-only)' started by Dave, Feb 24, 2010.

  1. Dave

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  2. Black Cloud

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    Why is this in la pocilga?
     
  3. CrystalGeezer

    CrystalGeezer My secret's my enzyme.

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  4. Stephen

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    Wow, that was pretty amazing. I liked that very much, and I could relate to it in parts. Touching.
     
  5. Black Cloud

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    Don't talk to me, no
    About people who are "nice"
    'Cause I have spent my WHOLE LIFE
    in RUINS
    Because of people who are "nice"

    :p
     
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    Everybody's aware of the sadness of day-to-day living. It doesn't take effort to present them in a harsh, defeated, 'honest' way.

    Pieces like this are too sappy and, what's more, ten-a-penny.
     
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    not eveyone is able to compete in this life the way you have apparently managed to do. why not afford them the last dignity of accepting what they had to say in their most intolerable moments.
     
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