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    synapticgate
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    Default NIGHTMARE # 6 & 9

    I woke to a thumping in a darkened room
    There was no one but me there, or so I
    assumed, just me and my heart beating
    like a universe in my chest.
    So heavy, so hollow-sunken I suppose
    Was the thought that nothing would ever
    come to a close, that I screamed until
    my voice was no more, faded and gone.

    Last night, I dreamed of green eyes burning
    through me, not an angel's hair away.
    And a mouth drawn tight in anger, but
    would not say-that which the eyes
    magnified in my mind.

    Legions of voices began to whisper my fate
    from the back of my mind, through the
    synaptic gate-exploding behind my eyes
    and filling them with tears.

    While emptiness and sorrow wash over my
    soul, recent occurrences are taking their
    toll-posing the question..what should I do.

    Rickey R. Dean

    Copyright ©2006 Rickey R Dean

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    Butterworths Revenge
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    Default Re: NIGHTMARE # 6 & 9

    I like it, very encouraging to know there are some other Vampires out there like me.

    What does the title mean though? Are you playing on the sexual act of the same numeration?

    > I woke to a thumping in a darkened room
    > There was no one but me there, or so I
    > assumed, just me and my heart beating
    > like a universe in my chest.
    > So heavy, so hollow-sunken I suppose
    > Was the thought that nothing would ever
    > come to a close, that I screamed until
    > my voice was no more, faded and gone.

    > Last night, I dreamed of green eyes burning
    > through me, not an angel's hair away.
    > And a mouth drawn tight in anger, but
    > would not say-that which the eyes
    > magnified in my mind.

    > Legions of voices began to whisper my fate
    > from the back of my mind, through the
    > synaptic gate-exploding behind my eyes
    > and filling them with tears.

    > While emptiness and sorrow wash over my
    > soul, recent occurrences are taking their
    > toll-posing the question..what should I do.

    > Rickey R. Dean

    > Copyright ©2006 Rickey R Dean

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    synapticgate
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    Default Re: NIGHTMARE # 6 & 9

    > I like it, very encouraging to know there are some other Vampires out
    > there like me.

    > What does the title mean though? Are you playing on the sexual act of the
    > same numeration?

    yes, actually.

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    synapticgate
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