WHY DO WE TRUST IN STARS?--A POEM

[jAVIER]

Why do we trust in stars?
Because we must,

We do.
Because we are all in pain.

Because it all the same.
Because we love and loose.

It seems we are never the right ones to choose.
We laugh when there’s an ironic situation.

We have double coated hearts.
Something you should think of before you start, to fall.
Because we cry and choose to innocently lie.
We dress to impress and impress to depress.

We must.
We love to live. And wont ever give.

We kiss each other, were best of friends because we need protection from the beginning to never end.

Because we MOZ

WE TRUST IN STARS

 

[greasetea]

Re: WHY DO WE THINK WE CAN BE POETS? this sucks buddy!

> Because we love and loose.

> It seems we are never the right ones to choose.
I have seen you have taken the liberty to try to squish lose as "loose". Listen crackerjack, Hallmark wouldn't print this on a sample giveway. You are a horrible poet and your ryhme and rythmic technique (if I can call it that) is so horrible, I feel like choking my stupid neighbor.

Listen poontang, next time you get an idea to write a poem:

1. Don't, you rrrrr-rrr--rrr--r-r-rrrreally suck at it.

2. Kill yourself so you cannot infect us with all this bad poetry

3. Do something useful with that lack of talent and parade yourself to the impending group of hip hop kiddies on their way (a hip hop Christina Aguileria anyone?)

Oh who am I kidding, just off yourself you damn twat!

 

[RED]

Re: WHY DO WE THINK WE CAN BE POETS? this sucks buddy!

> I have seen you have taken the liberty to try to squish lose as
> "loose". Listen crackerjack, Hallmark wouldn't print
> this on a sample giveway. You are a horrible poet and your ryhme
> and rythmic technique (if I can call it that) is so horrible, I
> feel like choking my stupid neighbor.

> Listen poontang, next time you get an idea to write a poem:

> 1. Don't, you rrrrr-rrr--rrr--r-r-rrrreally suck at it.

> 2. Kill yourself so you cannot infect us with all this bad
> poetry

> 3. Do something useful with that lack of talent and parade
> yourself to the impending group of hip hop kiddies on their way
> (a hip hop Christina Aguileria anyone?)

> Oh who am I kidding, just off yourself you damn twat!

come on, give the guy a break. I commend Javier for posting his poetry on the board. It part of his poetic development process. Let him be! Javier, continue writing and reading, and be who you want and desire.

 

[suzanne]

Re: WHY DO WE THINK WE CAN BE POETS? this sucks buddy!

O does the smell of 3 week old garbage in the summer sun permeate my nose?
Hark, no! 'tis that Greasetea and his pedestrian prose!
"Oh master, where does his poem lie?"
the swallow to the sun doth cried
"Nowhere to be seen!"
Said the busy bumble bee
"No poem for javier to set his example by?"
"No, greasetea doth not a single hyperbole write!"
"My goodness! How can such a wanker criticize
What he himself has not the guts to write?"

The town was rife with strife
For Greasetea had no life
The sleepy town began to realize it's mistake
and came to their senses when the elders finally spake
As said by the Fairy Princess Hillary Clinton
"Yea, It doth take a Village to raise an Idiot" and his time was surely done


it's ok to care

 

[Interestingboy]

Last Night I dreamt...

Anoche soñé que me amabas...
como antes...
Hoy que no estas te extraño...

 

[Wall of Voodoo]

I'm on a Mexican.... radio...

> Anoche soñé que me amabas...
> como antes...
> Hoy que no estas te extraño...

...can't understand just what did he say?...

 

[Wilma]

Re: WHY DO WE THINK WE CAN BE POETS? this sucks buddy!

Greasetea,
I have to admit I laughed once, and I am still ashamed.

 

[Auntie T.]

Stones on tour?

> Greasetea,
> I have to admit I laughed once, and I am still ashamed.

I never expected to have one of the Flintstones steal my line! Wi-----lma!