Not great but not that bad either. It's good in that, its not a 'Steven impersonation' but to me you sound like a calmer version of Mark E Smith (of The Fall).
Archangel risin' on the moon
Just to save me from this tomb
I'll cry the tears of time all day
'Til she wipes them all away
I really, really like it. A different take.
Fab, love it, well done and welcome.
I'm stubborn,selfish, and to old.....
*tips hat to the gentlefolk of the morrisey-solo forums*