Invisible (from a creative writing website)

[Dave]

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Youhen.

[Black Cloud]

Why is this in la pocilga?

[CrystalGeezer]

Why is this in la pocilga?

Because it's not nice to think about killing oneself.

[Stephen]

Wow, that was pretty amazing. I liked that very much, and I could relate to it in parts. Touching.

[Black Cloud]

Because it's not nice to think about killing oneself.

Don't talk to me, no
About people who are "nice"
'Cause I have spent my WHOLE LIFE
in RUINS
Because of people who are "nice"

[Our Lady]

Everybody's aware of the sadness of day-to-day living. It doesn't take effort to present them in a harsh, defeated, 'honest' way.

Pieces like this are too sappy and, what's more, ten-a-penny.

[penfoldsfive]

Everybody's aware of the sadness of day-to-day living. It doesn't take effort to present them in a harsh, defeated, 'honest' way.

Pieces like this are too sappy and, what's more, ten-a-penny.

not eveyone is able to compete in this life the way you have apparently managed to do. why not afford them the last dignity of accepting what they had to say in their most intolerable moments.