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Oscar the Wilde Poet
January 6, 2000, 08:38 PM
Hello again all you Morrissey and Poetry heads
here is my latest work. Please be nice.

HALF FILLED GLASS

Incarcerated within 4 walls
memories and visions are all I posses anymore
the radio sings me your favorite song
and the smell of burnt candle wax smothers my nose

short and sweet
you never said goodbye
how did you come to this?
why didn't take me with you? I would have gladly gone
an explanation please

Another hot summer day
still so cold inside
never to feel the warmth again
I drive by your grave
my car will never be the same
and the steep Cliff reunites us once again...........

Hopefully Morrissey will play some West coast shows when he is done with the East..

greasetea
January 6, 2000, 10:43 PM
more like full filled glass of SHlT!!!!!!! Damnit you lousy piece of crap, tick infested moron, greasy faced dimwit, half witted monkey-knuckle nigglebump.
YOU dare ask us to be nice? You be fuggin nice to us by not exposing anymore of your retarded, idiotic poetry! Man, post your own stuff on your own site..and by the way, your Moz prose is such a cliched turn-off that i think you have two options.
1. Stick your damn head in the freakin oven and put it on broil.
2. Slit your wrists you waste of life!
Moz rules!

Oscar the Wilde Poet
January 6, 2000, 11:04 PM
> more like full filled glass of SHlT!!!!!!! Damnit you lousy
> piece of crap, tick infested moron, greasy faced dimwit, half
> witted monkey-knuckle nigglebump.
> YOU dare ask us to be nice? You be fuggin nice to us by not
> exposing anymore of your retarded, idiotic poetry! Man, post
> your own stuff on your own site..and by the way, your Moz prose
> is such a cliched turn-off that i think you have two options.
> 1. Stick your damn head in the freakin oven and put it on broil.
> 2. Slit your wrists you waste of life!
> Moz rules!

Your challenge has been dully excepted Mr. Greasy.
I hate stooping to your level, but somebody must put you in your place.

I would gladly slit my wrists if you were to join me, the unfortunate thing though is you will not be there to see all the joy it would bring your family, your job would have to find a new French Fry cook, and your right forearm will not be as strong as usual.
I'm sure this is not the last time I will hear from you, so you may now ask your 8 year old brother for some new Elementry school yard insults.

I really hate all this, so I promise I will never respond to such immuturity again.

Truly dissapointed..
January 6, 2000, 11:30 PM
> YOU dare ask us to be nice? You be fuggin nice to us by not
> exposing anymore of your retarded, idiotic poetry! Man, post
> your own stuff on your own site..and by the way, your Moz prose
> is such a cliched turn-off that i think you have two options.

YOu know how hard it is to share poetry that means something to you with other people??? Weather its great or even Morrissey-ish or completely sucks.. WHO CARES! He didnt offend you in any way and if he did.. well get over it!

> 1. Stick your damn head in the freakin oven and put it on broil.
> 2. Slit your wrists you waste of life!!
> Moz rules!

Im ashamed to know there's even fans of Morrissey like you out there.. I usually dont respind to these "types" of post.. but really what is everyones point in putting people down? Does it make you feel better? We aren't 5 years old anymore now are we?

ANYWAY.. Any poem that has meaning to you is good so keep writing osc!

SleepTheClockAround
January 6, 2000, 11:42 PM
> more like full filled glass of SHlT!!!!!!! Damnit you lousy
> piece of crap, tick infested moron, greasy faced dimwit, half
> witted monkey-knuckle nigglebump.
> YOU dare ask us to be nice? You be fuggin nice to us by not
> exposing anymore of your retarded, idiotic poetry! Man, post
> your own stuff on your own site..and by the way, your Moz prose
> is such a cliched turn-off that i think you have two options.
> 1. Stick your damn head in the freakin oven and put it on broil.
> 2. Slit your wrists you waste of life!
> Moz rules!

What in the hell brought on the barrage of insults?.....i havent heard such a string of bad language since i saw trainspotting. If bad poetry is a sin half the people on here should be shot.

greasetea
January 6, 2000, 11:46 PM
> If bad poetry is a sin half the people on here should be shot.

You're right! half the people should be shot and the other half (including your sorry fuitface head) should slit their wrists. Let someone else sort it out you pee-drinking, camel smelling stupid mongerl-cow. Why don't you and all the bad poets just do us all a favor and gas yourselves!!!!!

My gosh, Moz rules!

Mike
January 6, 2000, 11:52 PM
Aren't you guys taking greasetea a little too seriously? I think he's just trying to create an apparent personality.

He's probably laughing his ass off at you guys. I find his silly name-calling and phrases quite amusing.

SleepTheClockAround
January 7, 2000, 12:10 AM
> Aren't you guys taking greasetea a little too seriously? I think
> he's just trying to create an apparent personality.

> He's probably laughing his ass off at you guys. I find his silly
> name-calling and phrases quite amusing.

Tone down on the angst and stop watching so much mtv.....it will help your acne and maybe you will get layed.

Nellie
January 7, 2000, 02:59 AM
> Tone down on the angst and stop watching so much mtv.....it will
> help your acne and maybe you will get layed.

Why attack Mike? in fact, why are you attacking anyone?..is that above discription really you Clock? Cheee, man...can't we all just be Morrissey fans in union and ignore a$$holes like greasy and clock boy?

For all purposes, these imbeciles should be banished from posting.
No need to contribute this SleepTheClockAround..you are an idiot too!

SleepTheClockAround
January 7, 2000, 04:51 AM
> Why attack Mike? in fact, why are you attacking anyone?..is that
> above discription really you Clock? Cheee, man...can't we all
> just be Morrissey fans in union and ignore a$$holes like greasy
> and clock boy?

> For all purposes, these imbeciles should be banished from
> posting.
> No need to contribute this SleepTheClockAround..you are an idiot
> too!

Hey maybe you....i.e. nellie, should read all the previous posts before coming to a conclusion about my character. By the way, i apprectiate that you called me an idiot while trying to make yourself look better(good job on that one......yahoo!)

greasetea
January 7, 2000, 03:41 PM
> Im ashamed to know there's even fans of Morrissey like you out
> there..

shame has got nothing to do with it you slag! See that razor? You know what to do...