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Dave
February 24, 2010, 08:04 AM
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Youhen.

Black Cloud
February 24, 2010, 12:35 PM
Why is this in la pocilga?

CrystalGeezer
February 24, 2010, 01:20 PM
Why is this in la pocilga?

Because it's not nice to think about killing oneself.

Stephen
February 24, 2010, 02:41 PM
Wow, that was pretty amazing. I liked that very much, and I could relate to it in parts. Touching.

Black Cloud
February 24, 2010, 03:04 PM
Because it's not nice to think about killing oneself.

Don't talk to me, no
About people who are "nice"
'Cause I have spent my WHOLE LIFE
in RUINS
Because of people who are "nice"

:p

Our Lady
February 24, 2010, 03:14 PM
Everybody's aware of the sadness of day-to-day living. It doesn't take effort to present them in a harsh, defeated, 'honest' way.

Pieces like this are too sappy and, what's more, ten-a-penny.

penfoldsfive
February 26, 2010, 09:08 PM
Everybody's aware of the sadness of day-to-day living. It doesn't take effort to present them in a harsh, defeated, 'honest' way.

Pieces like this are too sappy and, what's more, ten-a-penny.

not eveyone is able to compete in this life the way you have apparently managed to do. why not afford them the last dignity of accepting what they had to say in their most intolerable moments.